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Old 3 February 2018, 11:39 PM   #32
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Just for fun, two other translations of the haiku have been suggested.

Bird of the Mountain it arrived and it disturbed the cherry blossom

and

A bird in the mountain cherry blossoms are cherry blossoms

Personally I prefer the former.
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