When you bolded certain words you make it look like the aftermarket band was the purpose of the sentence.
This is how it reads:
BeckerTime is proud to offer this gorgeous GENUINE ROLEX timepiece. It is a Ladies Rolex Stainless Steel Datejust Date Watch w/White MOP Diamond & Bezel that has been fitted with a brand new custom aftermarket oyster band.
My contention is that the ad is worded and displayed to do two things:
1. Downplay the HUGE NEGATIVE QUALITY the buyer should be aware of.
2. Muddy the water for the non-savvy. It almost sounds like a REALLY GOOD thing to have
a brand new custom aftermarket oyster band Some people might easily assume OYSTER is a Rolex trademark.
To be totally HONEST and FAIR it should read this way
Quote:
BeckerTime is proud to offer this gorgeous GENUINE ROLEX watch head. It is a Ladies Rolex Stainless Steel Datejust Date Watch w/White MOP Diamond & Bezel that has been fitted with a Non-original, Non-Rolex, inexpensive, new custom aftermarket band.
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